My Proposal

The biggest issue in Brazil is the violence and brutality from the police to the citizens. This is a really impacting problem that needs to be fixed. Police men and the government do things that dont to protect their people. The security is not helping, their making everything worse by using violence to resolve the “problems”.

We cannot let this happen, imagine the children in the future. Imagine how they are going to react to their problems. Brazil has to change. In 2014 is the FIFA (federal international football association) and in 2016 the Rio Olympic Games. It’s a really big issue! A lot of visitors are coming. Not only the visitors but also the Brazilians have the right as a human to be respected.

Brazil needs a fair government. A government that is willing to solve the problems of the people and be FAIR. We should put more policemen on the street and make sure that criminals are caught and punished to the full extent of the law. Also all the police men that are killing and abusing people should be caught and send to prison. The existing police do not give that confidence and trust that people need.

Brazilian need more jobs, the majority of the problems are caused by the high unemployment rate. There is no social protection for the unemployed as well as the many more that live below the poverty line.  Violent crimes are thought to be committed by desperate people who have no jobs and live below the poverty line. A better education is also needed. People think that the education is thing that is causing all the violence in Brazil. My opinion is that we should work on these three things.

• 49% completely agreed with the statement "To end the violence, we need to get more police"
• 68% completely agreed with the statement "To end the violence, we need to create more jobs"
• 75% completely agreed with the statement "To end the violence, we need to improve the level of education"